Hello!
What you have so far is solid and straight-to-the-point. However, I would adjust it slightly in order to be more shocking to your audience.
Here is my suggestion: "Smog pollution is affecting earth's air quality and is causing the planet's temperature to rise at a rapid rate, which can be detrimental to all of earth's species if it is not controlled soon."
I am not entirely sure what your topic is or what you intend to persuade your audience into believing, so you can change what I have written into what works best for your essay. I would recommend adding an interesting/scary fact into it in order to convince your audience of the importance of your topic.
I hope this helps you! Have a great day!
- Mal
Answer:
Just look that up into google. I already did and found 3 good websites. I would add them but brainly deletes my comments because I'm attaching websites URL. Sorry.
Answer:
1a : the use of physical force so as to injure, abuse, damage, or destroy. b : an instance of violent treatment or procedure. 2 : injury by or as if by distortion, infringement, or profanation : outrage. 3a : intense, turbulent, or furious and often destructive action or force the violence of the storm.
Explanation:
The word partition refers to the act of dividing any space into two parts or more.
In the above sentences, the sentence which uses the word partition correctly is 2. Becky stood behind the partition that separated the audience from the people backstage and waited for her cue to enter.
In the above sentence, the words partition separates the two spaces, space of audience with that of space of people backstage.
Other sentences do not confine with the proper use of word partition because it relates the division of object and not spaces. Hence, sentence two is correct.
The correct answer is B. The effects of slavery are much worse than the effects of materialism.
Explanation:
A critique is an evaluation or assessment in which the author aims at analyzing the positive and negative aspects of some material (novel, story, movie). This implies for a critique to be valid it needs to provide some judgment that analyses a specific aspect of the material analyzed. In the excerpt presented from Utopia, it is explained the Prince or government decided to use precious materials such as gold or silver in objects such as chamber-pots or close-stools to avoid people feel these materials are special. Additionally, these materials are used to show slavers are inferior by creating gold chains and making slavers wear gold earrings. From this excerpt the statement that works a critique of it is "The effects of slavery are much worse than the effects of materialism" because this is the only statement that goes beyond summarizing the information of the excerpt by analyzing the effects the concept of materialism has in comparison to the existence of slavery by stating the use of gold and silver in certain objects is not as harmful as it is slavery. This means statement B. is evaluation the aspects of the excerpt which is the main purpose of a critique.