Recall a "first" in life: the birth of your first baby sibling, your first time driving, the first birthday party you remember,
or another first. Write two paragraphs that describe this important event, paying particular attention to details and sequencing. Remember that details refer to the facts of observations an author includes or omits. Think of details as specifics. For example, if the author said she drove a Mustang, you wouldn't know much. However, if she said she drove a 1965 candy apple red Mustang convertible with baby soft white seats and polished chrome instruments, you would have a much better idea. Use proper spelling and grammar.
I remember the first time I traveled abroad with friends, which actually happened not a long time ago. My two friends and I saw that our favorite band was having an European tour, and given that they weren't coming to our country, we decided to travel abroad to listen to them live. We thought this might be a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity that we couldn't possibly miss out on which is why we packed our bags and went to Austria, Vienna. The venue was very small but crowded because many people gathered to listen to this band. The three of us weren't exactly in front of the stage, but we were close enough to see the band members clearly and listen to their beautiful songs live. I remember three of the band members were wearing all black, whereas one was wearing a shirt with fire prints all over it, which he threw away into the crowd when the concert was over. I also remember people going crazy when the band started playing one of their older songs. My friends and I were definitely one of those people. We came to Vienna only for one day - to explore the city a bit and enjoy the concert in the evening, which was exactly what we did. It was one of the best days in my life.
In short, what makes a poem a poem is the ability to make the reader feel something. ... If it's a serious or depressing poem, the language should reflect that. If it's a poem about how long something should take, the words should not be short and move wuickly over the tongue.
