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Just follow along with what you did for your intro and body then for your conclusion wrap it all up in a way that makes since.
Just say this, I’ve been planting some ideas that some of them are fitting with the context and others don’t, I just need to change a little the vocabulary to make it more fluent and that should be it, just want to make sure the ideas are placed in the right order and subject.
Ok, so for starters, "hospitality" means, in a nutshell, caring for something or someone. Extreme hospitality is caring for someone more than is needed. For example, if you are staying at my house, hospitality would be cooking you dinner and serving it, extreme hospitality would be asking what you want to eat, or doing your laundry or something.