Read the following excerpt from a student’s essay: The speaker gives an example of how he used to feel and contrasts that with h
ow he feels today. Technology and support were important. They changed his perspective. He uses a simile "like a bird soaring through the sky" to show how he feels today. Which revision effectively incorporates transitions to improve the flow of ideas?
Technology and support were important, changing his perspective. He uses a simile "like a bird soaring through the sky" despite how he feels today. Technology and support were important in changing his perspective. To show the contrast of how the speaker feels, he uses a simile "like a bird soaring through the sky" to show how he feels today.
Technology and support were very important. However, they changed his perspective. He uses a simile "like a bird soaring through the sky" because of how he feels today.
Technology and support were important because they changed his perspective and because he uses a simile "like a bird soaring through the sky" to show how he feels today.
This question is from a big test and i cant afford to fail, pls help me out
I think the afterlife is something peaceful. if it were bad, then she wouldn't say so. I imagine she's somewhere warm. Not weather wise, but warm colors and soft lights. Something pure, a place where she can think, relaxing. which makes it easier to speak so <em>fondly</em> of her death.
