According to Lofland’s scheme, Wang is likely to be focused
on the magnitudes. Magnitude is being defined in psychology as the ability of
an individual to be able to discriminate when there are two available stimuli
that are likely different from one another.
Well, Native Americans had a bad impact with the Spanish exploration. The natives had no immunity to the diseases the spanish had brought over with them (examples are smallpox, influenza, and chicken pox). This caused a lot of american Indians to get sick and die. If this is a multiple choice question, it would be alot better if you could add the choices.
In conclusion, I would recommend not passing any extra questions (so the reader can have a sense of closure). Also, I think the sentence “it is helpful if you already speak a foreign language.” Should be removed because it puts a limitation on the reader and makes them feel like they have an intimidating obligation. I would suggest something along the lines of:
Volunteering overseas is a unique and positive way to explore the world. The cost is often reasonable and the benefits obtained far outweigh the negatives. One can travel to magnificent new places and be able to make a difference where it is really needed. It cannot be recommended enough to engage in there wonderful opportunities as they are truly life-changing in their impact.
