I was only able to find 1 pronoun shift.
Teenagers often want more freedom, but you need to show that you are responsible.
<span>The given choices are all
relevant to what is asked. They can all be used depending on the type of essay
you are crafting. If you are writing a humorous message, a humorous anecdote as
an ending can be effective. If you’re writing a formal, informative essay, a formal summary of your overall message
would make sense. If you are promoting your own ideals and beliefs, you can
either ask the reader to take some kind of action or end on a note that's likely to stick
in the reader's mind. There is no definite answer here since it would
largely depend on your essay type. </span>
Happiness. If you live longer but have a worse life it’s not worth it. If you live shorter but have a better life it’s the better option
