When I revise, I go through my paper and highlight all the mistakes that I can, using a different color for each kind. Then after I have done that, I just go through and fix them. It helps the revision go quicker and be more manageable.
John Muir lived up to his doctrine by not being the first man to reach the camp. He was no simple hiker. He would stop many times during his way up to examine trees, flowers, animals, nature, and everything that surrounded him. This means he didn't rush through life, he enjoyed every part of it.
The rhetorical technique most used in this excerpt is shift.
Answer: Option D.
<u>Explanation:</u>
Shift is one of the most commonly used rhetorical techniques. In this kind of rhetorical technique, the author of the passage changes the tone or the tone of the writing of the passage within a piece. This kind of rhetorical device is used when there has to be shift in the focus of the theme of the passage or there is change in the language according to the change in the scene.
In this passage also the author makes use of this rhetorical device while talking about the different scenes and events.
