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Tomorrow I have to walk the dog, write an essay, and mail a letter. This example illustrates the proper use of parallel structure
Answer:
Ghandi’s non-violent personality is a rhetorical device all unto itself. It makes him look beyond approachable to the beneficiary of the report. One example starts on line 64. Ghandi states, “If you think that there is any substance in my letter, and if you will care to discuss matters with me, and if to that end you would like me to postpone publication of this letter, I shall gladly refrain on receipt of a telegram to that effect soon after this reaches you.” Ghandhi doesn’t pressurize the British government, he propounds to not publish the letter so that they can sit down and have a decent talk. On top of that, he has it hand-delivered by an English companion. He is definitely far more inviting than the Americans were in their Declaration of Independence.
Explanation:
I didnt change much i just put different words that sound smarter
It is not only what we eat, but when and how we eat that greatly affect our health and weight.
