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seraphim [82]
3 years ago
14

Revise my writing and tell me what i can do better.

English
2 answers:
Alenkinab [10]3 years ago
8 0
You need a thesis statement in your intro paragraph. "Even" in the first sentence is capitalized even though it is after a comma. Rather than just giving background, try to relate the background info to examples in the novel. 
Klio2033 [76]3 years ago
5 0
Yahhh what she said
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