Does dialogue sound right?
Answer:
Well first thanks for the points second it was horrible because I was is school all day -_-
Mount Rushmore needs to be capitalized!
After Mount Rushmore, we need to put a period and start a new sentence so capitalize "It".
This is how i think it should be
When the rain finally cleared, we got our first glimpse of Mount Rushmore. It was even bigger than I imagined!