Sloppy is the answer, i think. correct me if im wrong:)
I think it might be A because the part, also and ,marine is a little confusing.
I think the answer is c hope it helps tell me if I'm wrong
Internal. external. Mary becomes a heroine. Mary vs captain sawyer. from what I have read it all seems right!!
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