It makes the narrator seem disciplined.
because on the upon reading the excerpt i somehow see that the character seemed so polite and proper.
Answer:
Denise walked around the pond, the pond was small.
Answer:
Simile
Explanation: A simile uses like as or than
I think All because we have to check for coherence just in case there are INcoherence words that don't make sense and the grammar might be written with mistakes. So also Proofreading and reviewing the sentence structures! ALL OF ABOVE
