Jefferson had written a pamphlet called A Summary Review of the Rights of British America. It denied all parliamentary authority over America and argued that the ties to British monarchy were volunteering and not irrevocable. ( The answer is C. )
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer: it would be c and d
Explanation: hope this helps
The answer should be D
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