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Successive governments have consistently failed to ring-fence a significant annual fund for cycling provision<u>,</u><u> </u>from within the transport budget. We have been joined by the Automobile Association Australian Cycling and Shane Page<u>, </u>in supporting calls for an annual budget of $20 per capita. We urge all parties to pledge this fund in their election manifestos. Australia leads the world in competitive cycling - it is time<u>,</u><u> </u>we did the same for our commuters.
Answer:
Successive governments have consistently failed to ring-fence a significant annual fund for cycling provision from within the transport budget. We have been joined by the Automobile Association Australian Cycling and Shane Page in supporting calls for an annual budget of $20 per capita. We urge all parties to pledge this fund in their election manifestos. Australia leads the world in competitive cycling - it is time we did the same for our commuters.
(I'm pretty sure you remove all of the commas in this paragraph)
A documented essay, also refered to as a research paper consist on a piece of writing in which information is incorporated, such as facts, arguments, and opinions, taken from the writings of authorities in a particular field. Sometimes a research paper is no more than a report of current thinking in a field, but more often a a docunmented essay demonstrates a thesis of your own, relying on outside sources for development and support of the thesis.
To sump up, a documentary essay uses research in order to support an idea.
Answer:
Martins claim is based more on emotion that reasoning
Explanation:Well martin is giveing more of a opinion notice how he says its not fair also his claim sounds like he issaying what he thinks there is no research and not reasoning