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The tense is all mixed up, but it looks like present is used most often, so "emitted" should be changed to "emits" and "pulled" should be changed to "pulls." I can't see the entire paragraph so just make sure that's consistent.
You don't need a comma in "running towards us with the fire extinguisher."
"Your mother and me" should be "Your mother and I." For reference try taking our "your mother" - it sounds pretty silly to say "me thinks" unless you're in the 1600s, right? And it should be "think" instead of "thinks."
The main method for the organization of ideas from the passage in chronological order.
<u>Explanation:</u>
- The idea organization consists of 5 steps they are topical or logical pattern, chronological pattern, spatial pattern, problem-solution followed by the cause or casual and effect pattern.
- The Chronology pattern is a time-based activity in which we have to order the points
- It gives the events of the stories with a timeline that can give us a clear picture of the passage. But it can be at the beginning, middle or even at the end too.
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It was to attract more settlers to the area.
