in ''Something, or somebody I know is worth my time'' There should be no comma interpunction after ''Something''.
''When you're broken down, and have the same pain you've felt a thousand times.'' There should be no comma after ''Down''.
Also, another mistake that I have found is in:
''Who does good, loves, and never ever lies.'' The mistake here is in ''never ever''. There should be no ''ever'' word because ''never ever'' is creating a tautology.
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