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Dear Mayor Levine,
We send our children to school so that they can learn the
skills that they need to prepare them for the challenges of life. In order to make this possible, we want them
to learn in an environment that is safe and secure. We truly believe that this
encourages them to learn and take part in school activities.
Lately, however, we are now troubled by reports that there
many unruly students who cause trouble for the school and other students as
well. What is more alarming is that many
of them are carrying concealed weapons and we are afraid that our children’s
lives will be at risk.
We urgently request
that your office to do something about this problem. We are worried about the
safety and welfare of our children is now at risk because of these recent
developments. We will be happy to work
with you in creating a safe in environment for our children to learn in school.
Thank you and God Bless!
Very Truly Yours,
John Doe
Answer: A. enjoyable or entertaining activities
Explanation:
The choice that best describes the sentence and explains how to improve it is: This sentence is complete and correct. It does not need any revision. The sentence above is an example of a complex sentence; it contains both an independent clause and a dependent or subordinate clause. The subordinate clause is introduced by the subordinating conjunction "after". After the comma, the independent clause follows to complete the whole thought of the sentence.
The answer would be an argument.
