If you do not know your audience's interests you will probably lose their interest.
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I imagine It may be difficult for only children to understand the kind of brotherly relationship that includes both devoted love and the most ruthless hatred. But my personal experience allowed me to better understand the brother´s relationship and therefore the text itself.
Explanation:
Text-to-self connections are the most interesting for me. Books often provide me comfort and helpful tools to apply in my personal life. The Outsider made me think of my family, specifically my relationship with my brothers. I love both of them, but family issues, mostly related to financial problems, often get in the way of us having a good relationship. We fight a lot.
I find a sign of hope in how Darry and Ponyboy reconcile at the end, at Sodapop´s request. Their brotherhood overcomes Dally’s and Johnny’s deaths while strengthening their family bond. I hope my brothers and I can someday do the same with our own issues.
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Sophia's life flashed before her eyes. "Jessica! Jessica help me up!" Sophia's fingers were sliping. If Jessica didn't help her out Sophia would fall to her doom.
"No way! You stole Daniel from me and now you must pay!" Jessica roared.
Sophia scream right back at her, "I did not! He is my best friend! That's all we are! Please- AHHH!!!" Sophia hung only by one hand. She had tears running down her face. All she had done was hug Daniel. 2 fingers left on the cliff and Jessica still didn't care. "Jessica help me! Please! I'll explain everything!"
Jessica looked at Sophia. She noticed how honest and weak she looked. She grabbed Sophia's arm and hauled her up. "Start speaking before I push you off this mountain."
"I've been friends with Daniel since I was 5. He is a brother to me. Jessica, I would NEVER love him any other way. Please, believe me. You can push me off now that you heard me." Sophia as trustworthy as ever stood there. Knowing that Jessica would push her off.
"Can you forgive me Sophia?"
"I'll always forgive you. No matter what you do."
"In that case..." Jessica pushed Sophia of the cliff.
It had been the most surprising thing that had ever happened to them, and probably ever would.
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Pretty good writing, I bet you can write more
