Answer:
It's a little confusing but i think you should describe the apartment or place or condo maybe explain the colors of the walls or the door shape or how big or small it is?
Explanation:
"like an arrow presently to his home in the green world beneath"
The sentence that had correct sentence structure is
Before we were able to get financing we had to have the house appraised by independent appraiser
The second one
is the best
