Answer
The Ultimate Experience
They were on their way, their boat died, they grabbed the dinghy and reached a deserted island.
They made sure to protect themselves, feed themselves, and find water.
Knife, Fire -(stuff to make fire), Rope - many uses for rope
I would add the info about the animals on the island and what it was like to look up at the night sky so dark and beautiful full of stars
Two men were recently rescued from a deserted island. They were found safe. They enjoyed the experience so much that they did not want to leave. They were rescued.
Ending - I can see the Swiss Family Robinson story taking place and these 2 guys building them a house and staying on the island.
Question: Would you like to end up on a deserted island?
Explanation:
Explanation:
1. Word choice - d. The vocabulary words you use in your paper. 2. Ideas and content - c. You coming through in your writing. 3. Writing conventions - e. How your sentences are put together. 4. Sentence fluency - f. The rules of language. 5. Organization - b. The direction you are heading and the order of your details. 6. Voice - a. What you have to say and your reason for writing.
A. to highlight how remarkable Curie's later achievements were, considering her difficult beginnings
