The most obvious fault of this paragraph is the lack of punctuation marks. The entire paragraph is one sentence, when there are supposed to be periods, commas, and other punctuation marks to separate them. This makes this paragraph one run-on sentence, which is grammatically incorrect.
It should be <span>claim, reason, evidence, counterclaim and rebuttal, conclusion. I took an AP English class last year that taught me how to write a persuasive essay. </span>
I would say that remedy/recompense is the correct answer. Recompense means to compensate or make amends.
