B) in the prewriting stage
you have to know what you are going to write about and why so, in the prewriting stage
Answer:
In the story "Rules of the game" by Tiger and Rose has five main elements of structure which are:
exposition, rising action. climax, falling action and resolution. i will be explaining the five elements below:
Explanation:
The Exposition: The exposition of the story is when we learn that Waverly Jong (the narrator), lives in Chinatown. and how she relates with her family. When she says " we lived in a place, in a warm, clean, two bedroom flat that sat above a small Chinese bakery specializing in steamed pastries and dim sum"
The climax of the story is when Waverly ran away from home when her mother was taking pride in her. This is the climax because it is the turning point of the story. here is the height of tension where the reader wonders wether Waverly can survive on her own.
The rising action of the story is when Waverly returns home and her mother used the silence treatment on her.
The falling action of the story is when waverly was running and find out that she could not live independently nor completely avoid her family. she said "I ran until it hurt and i realized i had nowhere to go, that i was not running from anything."
The resolution is when she said "I closed my eyes and wondered my next move."
Answer:
Within minutes, the matter and food that fuels the protagonists are both helpers that made a difference in the world with their thinking skills. The groups also took their own free time to help people heat up their homes and donate phones. The difference between the two hero groups is that one group worked to heat up homes with leftover oil. The other group also worked very hard to donate over 180 million minutes to soldiers!
Explanation:
I improved the paragraph by adding commas where much needed pauses are needed, as well as adding adverbs.
Much of the paragraph is missing important pauses, causing it to feel rushed. In other words, it's important that your readers wouldn't be running out of breath reading your story. I also just changed phrase that seemed to stick out a bit.
I changed "activity time", being changed to just "free time", as "free time is far more commonly used to describe one's own time for their own activities.
I also changed "in" to "within" as it is generally best in novels to have more, long or intricate words in novels. It makes papers seem more professional.
Finally, I fixed some spelling errors like a missing space after "Phones.", and changing the "2" to a "two" as any number under ten should always be spelled out (if the number is 10 or over then it's optional).
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