To [Friend]:
Here are three reasons why you should not end your education.
- Without education, you would not be able to go to college and therefore, you would not make much -- or any at all -- money.
- Education allows us to convert information into knowledge. Ending your education early would mean ending your ability to obtain knowledge. Therefore, you would probably end up homeless on the streets.
- People take away one's education to turn him or herself into slaves. By ending your education, you are willing to become a slave. Slaves complete laborious work and were often punished by whipping, beating, and burning.
Thank you for listening to my concerns and reasonings on why you should not end your education.
From,
[Person]
Answer:
Making judgments about whether a person is morally responsible for her behavior, and holding others and ourselves responsible for actions and the consequences of actions, is a fundamental and familiar part of our moral practices and our interpersonal relationships.
Explanation:
Moral responsibility refers to a call to action, where the opposite(inaction) would result in a moral failure. an example would be if you see a person choking, and you know how to perform the Heimlich manuver but rather than help you do nothing. You are by inaction assisting in that persons death.
<span>My suggestions are in bold.
"Even since the beginning of it all, America has never truly been one."
</span><span>Change even to ever.
</span><span>"While slavery does not any longer pertains to today’s society, the obstacle of ostracism is still prominent. All the time stories of racial police shootings are in the news. Ostracism, or exclusion, is another concerning problem facing the country."
<span>You introduced us to ostracism more than once. An introduction of an key point should not be repeated.</span><span>
"</span></span>All the time stories of racial police shootings are in the news."
It sounds awkward and seems grammatically incorrect. Revise this sentence.
"<span>The purpose many have in mind when they come to the country, freedom of religion results in thousands of different practices of religion with many different views and beliefs."
</span><span>Add a comma after "freedom of religion."
</span><span>"The people of America also have many different beliefs because of their plentiful diversity and backgrounds."
Plentiful is describing diversity. I'm not sure if this is correct or not, but, just to be safe, consider changing "plentiful diversity and backgrounds" to "variety of backgrounds."</span>
You could've gotten the answer off the internet. But anyways the answer is: Grammar is important because it is the language that makes it possible for us to talk about language. ... "People associate grammar with errors and correctness. But knowing about grammar also helps us understand what makes sentences and paragraphs clear and interesting and precise.
D. Jarvis likes jazz and often attends jazz concerts.
