Answer:
the , (comma) placement
Explanation:
it should have been by the word soft instead of velvety.
example:
Patrick Star gently stroked the puppy's soft, velvety fur.
I was always taught to write a transition sentence, and restate your thesis backwards before writing a concluding sentence. For example, if my thesis statement was "Thoreau's writings show an appreciation for nature, individualistic ideas, and rebellion against common society," then my conclusion paragraph would have a transition sentence, a sentence about rebellion against society, then independence, and appreciation of nature. Then there would be a concluding sentence.
Not sure if that's what you were looking for, but that's what I got!
Answer:
There are more obese US adults than those who are just overweight. According to a study in The Journal of the American Medical Association (JAMA), in 2008, the obesity rate among adult Americans was estimated at 32.2% for men and 35.5% for women; these rates were roughly confirmed by the CDC again for 2009–2010.
Explanation:
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