Answer:
C. A score of two is best because, although the writing stays on task, there are some errors in spelling and grammar
Explanation:
So, two basic criteria for giving the score to this essay are focus on the task and spelling and grammar errors.
This is supposed to be a persuasive essay; it needs to convince the mayor in the need for a park. The author states the current situation, emphasizes the dangers of playing in the street, provides some expert evidence which suggest benefits of having a park and proposes a possible solution for the situation. Considering this, it's fair to say that the author stayed foccused to the task.
However, there are some errors found throughout the passage (they need to does instead of they need to do, he closest instead of the closest, les instead of less etc.)
With this in mind, it would be the most adequate to give this essay a score of two.
Answer:
hey dear sister how you been? this year we had to celebrate pride month in (your country) and we had a day off school beacuse it was the 4th of July also we had another week off cuz it was spring break i love you sister
<h2>Answer: C</h2><h2>i dont know the answer all the way but try and tell me if its right or not</h2>
Answer:
move slowly when they are on dry land
