The answer is A, when quoting a character the actions and physical interjections are without quotation marks. You also must end your quote with either a comma or period after the closed quote.
Answer:
The revision which is the best example of adding concrete detail is:
Claire Innes was separated from the people around her during the fire and she later found them near the same place they were separated.
The other options do not apply because the original sentence does not talk about Claire Innes' parents or family
Claire Innes became separated from her parents as the flames spread through the city, and she later found them.
In the panic, Claire Innes was separated from her family as they fled, and she was reunited with her father after the fire was extinguished.
In the panic, Claire Innes became separated from her brothers and sisters during the fire and she later found them after the fire was put out.
Explanation:
Here is the list of pronouns in the order they appear in the text, assigned to their particular groups:
1. interrogative pronouns (the ones who ask a certain question): WHAT, WHAT
2. possessive pronouns (the ones which show a certain possession): YOURS, YOURS
3. personal pronouns (I, you, he, she...): IT, IT, YOU, YOU, YOU, IT, US
4. indefinite pronoun (you cannot exactly determine who it is about): EVERYONE, ANYONE, SOME, ALL, EACH
5. relative pronouns (connect a clause to a noun/pronoun): WHO, THAT, WHATEVER
6. demonstrative pronouns (point to a particular thing): THESE
So that you don't drift off from the topic and to make it nice and simple
