Answer:
No, this is not an acceptable sentence.
Explanation:
It is a run-on sentence, and should be rewritten as: "Prejudice will not be tolerated, and all diversity concerns will be investigated."
Example of personal pronouns:
Personal: I, You, He, We, You and Them (with their female).
Of possessives: mine, yours, his (with its feminine and plural)
Demonstrative: this, that, that (with its feminine and plural)
Undefined: someone, nobody, anyone.
Relative: what, what, who, whose, when.
Answer:
Fragment
Explanation:
The phrase is an incomplete thought.
