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If you mean like or as in the second sentence I would move than to like
Answer: Her eyes sparkled like a diamond shining, page 21
The ball in the air looked like a potato in the sky, page 10
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Adjectives definitely help. Use sounds, touches, scents, and tastes if you want your audience to truly experience the setting. Try using a thesaurus as well.
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