Hello! You've done well so far by adding a simile (stanza 3, line 1) and repetition (stanza 1, beginning of lines 1 and 2). But I'd like to help add some personification to the poem with the first 2 lines since A. it rarely shows up and B. it's one of the most important factors towards a poem when creating something with such detail.
"The future winking at us wishing us good luck
as we wash away worries with ideas of us being stuck"
These two lines offer personification because we give the "future" a human attribute of winking and wishing luck towards a person. Also, Alliteration is included in both these lines which can be seen by the repetition of "w"'s makes it's way in the second half of the first line and the first half of the second line.
I want to add some repetition for the end since you started with repetition at the beginning since it'll bring your ideas together in a much neater way.
"My family still keeps it's traditional pride
My family will push on making one last stride."
You have the repetition in "my family" as you used above, and it explains the ending of the book with the family still being who are they, only they accomplished there goal by making one final action, which is making the move.
I hope these lines help and if you need any more help, feel free to ask!
Answer:b
Explanation: it will mark the living and the dead in the cultural history
The semicolon is used in the text above, to cause an intermediate effect between the comma and the period. In this case, when he used a semicolon the author was indicating to the reader that it was necessary to pause, in reading, longer than the pause of a comma, but less long than the pause of a point. This is done because the sentence displays a partially complete thought, but it will present more arguments to be finalized.
In a more simplified way, we can say that the use of a semicolon in the text above was made to separate long coordinated sentences with the same syntactic function.
1. Evaporation happens first... that's when the warmth from the sun causes water from oceans, lakes, etc to rise into the air turning into water vapor... then the water vapor collects together to form clouds
2. Condensation: When water vapor in clouds cool down and turn back into liquid water
3. Precipitation: When the water falls from the sky, in the form of rain, snow, hail, etc.
4. Runoff: when the water goes back onto the land and back into the ground, streams, etc.
***Transpiration is when moisture is carried through plants from the roots then changes into vapor and is released into the atmosphere (im not really sure where this goes)
Hope this helped!!!
Answer:
indefinite pronoun
Explanation:
because we dont actually know who it is.
