If i am to use a proper spelling and grammar, that sentence could be changed into :
The store, with its half roof covered in snow, was freezing to the point where the customers were visibly shaking
hope this helps
Do I have an article or something I can look at???
Answer:
You haven't specified what idioms to use, as it is only specific to your lesson, and you haven't attached a photo/picture to describe
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Therefore.
Explanation:
This is a more mature, way of explaining yourself. Therefore you have your answer! :)