One way you could possible do this is by, when Rapunzel is remembering her child hood, so her parents. as in the movie she has a flashback but instead of a flashback you could turn it into a dream sequence. you could also make another dream sequence about flin rider. as you probably know, Rapunzel has a crush on him, most likely making her think more about him, or dreaming about him. this one you could also make it humors, since we all know flint is quite a charmer.
hopefully this helps you!
Each paragraph you write should have a main idea or dialog basically those things see when you write if you have more than one main idea it confuses the reader.
Answer:
Onomatopoeia
Explanation:
Onomatopoeia is the use of descriptive words that sound or mimic the noise they are describing.
Examples:
The water splashed all over the top of the car.
Owls screech through the night and keep us awake when we are camping.
My stomach grumbled in hunger as we entered the restaurant.
Thumping and booming in excitement, my heart pounded to hear the results of the lottery.
Animals only understand the fear of pain and the fear of death is what Rainsford's attitude about animals at the begging of "The Most Dangerous Game
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