Well theres nothing really wrong with it. Maybe in certain places it can be questionable. But it's their bodies so whatever they want to do with it is their choice really.
A thesaurus would give you synonyms and antonyms. The answer is thesaurus.
i like the pumpkin pie that my mom baked for me for desert
Answer:
Intro paragraph:
Hook
Essential information to understand topic
Thesis
Body paragraphs:
Topic sentence relating to thesis
Evidence
Reasoning/Prove it’s relevant
2 Evidence
Reasoning
Concluding sentence to help transition to next paragraph
Conclusion paragraph
Rephrase thesis to state your argument again
Universal statement (something reader can relate to)
