Can someone check my writing in my first paragraph for my Memior and see if i did an error for Grammar and Puncuation i feel lik
e i need to add more.. please press the photo ok TBH I don't think I'm doing this right... it's sounds like a 3rd grader wrote this :( help oh an BTW I'm gonna indent and fix the spelling later I'm typing this on my phone so it's difficult thank u and press the photo so u can see the writing if u can't see it I just need to u to check the beginning