You can use the word "but" as a transitional word, but it is recommended to not use contractions. Likewise, your sentence will make more sense by changing doesn't to does not.
I think the answer is acceptance
<em>Answer:</em>
Instruct:
-Sequences / Steps
-Technical language
Entertain:
-Poetic language
-Humour
Explain:
-Factual Statements
-Facts and Figures
Persuade:
-Comparisons
-Slogans
Inform:
-What, Who, When, Where, and How statements
-'Why' and 'How' statements
Answer:
the authors use of pacing is not effective because the short sentences don't properly convey the sense of calm in the scene
Explanation: