Explanation:
There's not enough information here for me to answer this.
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
What is the main character of the story trying to accomplish or what is their main goal?
What is being said about the person, thing, or idea (the topic)?
What is the writer trying to say?
What is the most important point the author wants me to understand about the topic?
Is there a topic sentence?
Danforth needed a confession because the rule was that if they did not confess, they were hanged. If they did not confess and Danforth decided not to hang them, the town would become angry because 12 others were already hanged for not confessing.
Hope this helps!
Answer:
thats not very noice
i think a mod should delete this!
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