^does this need corrected or is it just a statement of mind?
I think this is fine the way you have it, any questions about just ask. :)♡
What is the question that you need help with? You didn't write it down with the scenario.
A claim
The sentence that contains the expression "all men are created equal" is a claim that needs to be justified or proven with reason and evidence. This is not a universal truth and is not experienced by many; thus, the author must prove his point or claim.