Question

Read the first sentences in Dorthea’s personal narrative. 1. Jamie and Jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. They are brother and sister. 3. Everyday, myself walks to school with them. What problem needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative? Dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative. The pronoun “they” should be replaced with the pronoun “we.” In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun. The word “Everyday” should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3.

Answer 1

Answer: C : )

I believe the correct answer would be C: In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.

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Explanation:

Answer 2

In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.

It should be 3. Everyday, I walk to school with them.