Read the first sentences in Dorthea’s personal narrative. 1. Jamie and Jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. They are brother an
d sister. 3. Everyday, myself walks to school with them. What problem needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative? Dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative. The pronoun “they” should be replaced with the pronoun “we.” In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun. The word “Everyday” should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3.
