OK so I'm writing an essay about adding something to the school curriculum and i chose Home Economics. I need help with the 2nd
paragraph with blood pressure, here is my 1st paragraph the introduction. " Did you know that teenagers eat more fast-food than they do home-cooked meals? This is because most teenagers don't know how to cook. If we added Home Economics we could teach people how to cook meals that are healthier than fast-food, Secondly it could help teenagers start to prepare for life when they have their own family. And lastly it would help keep blood pressure down to a decent level, avoiding extra risks of diabetes, heart-attacks, and seizures. However there is a way to avoid having high blood pressure."
IF YOU KNOW HOW TO WRITE ESSAYS PLEASE HELP I NEED A 2ND PARAGRAPH THIRD PARAGRAPH A FOURTH PARAGRAPH AND A CONCLUSION. YOU CAN CHOOSE TO HELP BUT I'M BEGGING FOR HELP
High blood pressure, or Hypertension, is very common especially in adults. It has no symptoms unless blood levels are life-threatningly high. Symptoms include headaches and nosebleeds, though these are very rare. Getting your blood pressure checked regularly is a good way of preventing and controlling this illness but, there are better ways of doing this such as eating home cooked meals instead of McDonalds' every day. Home economics classes would teach us that and more. We would learn how to make sure our houses stay clean and how to buy a house with a mortgage, if we could afford it. A home economics class would make sure every high school student left with a sense of confidence knowing what is necessary to survive in a modern day economy, something that most high school graduates don't feel when they leave. There you go. One paragraph down, about three to go!
