Answer:
used to say that it is better to fix a problem when it is small than to wait and let it become a bigger problem.
DON’T SAY THIS EXACTLY, REPHRASE AND MAKE BETTER, IM JUST GIVING IDEAS
The author could use more data especially for the 3rd paragraph, like about how much time is spent in community service, the author should use more data to try to show the reader the positives and negatives of the community service work
