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Clear, concise, and defined thesis. ...
Strong introduction. ...
Well-developed argument with strong evidential support. ...
Clearly organized structure. ...
Strong conclusion.
Hope this helps.
one day a young boy was sitting in the middle of the little picnic table enjoying the pickle that his mother had packed for him. He watched as all the people passed by it. when the young boy looked aside of him he saw a poodle Trot up next to him and sit. He noticed the poodle was hungry so he gave him a bit of his pickle. He pet the poodle very gentle until it trotted off into the distance. Lol...i guess
"A. You know, of course, that she used to dive for her college swim team." does not have any errors in comma usage. "Of course" is almost always surrounded by commas.
