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patriot [66]
3 years ago
13

Michael is giving his friend feedback on her paper. Which sections of his review contain constructive feedback?

English
1 answer:
SashulF [63]3 years ago
8 0
I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay.
That is the answer. :)
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