Michael surveyed the room earnestly, careful to note and absorb every last detail of the room that would be his for the next fou
r years. Against the far wall sat a twin-sized bed, adorned with a checkered pattern of red and blue. At the foot of the bed, Michael noted a small stool with two folded blankets atop its corduroy surface. Beside the bed was a nightstand, and on the nightstand were two things: an alarm clock and a dimly lit lamp. With a deep sigh, Michael hoisted his bag into the room and plopped onto the bed. It would do...for now.
Hunter asked, "What is going to happen with this crazy weather?".
Explanation:
I'm assuming you're improving the sentence. commented should be replaced with asked, since he is asking a question. Then you just have to add punctuation to the dialogue.
