A lot of descriptive imagery, excellent setting and sophisticated language. Use of punctuation is varied and concise which effectively engages the readers to continue reading.
One problem is sentence length. No examiner wants to mark your exam and immediately get hit in the face with a chunk of words. Separate your paragraphs individually.
A little tricky but I think the answer is B because it seems more of a statistic then an opinion
The thesis is <span>a statement or theory that is put forward as a premise to be maintained or proved.</span>
