Question

Read these sentences and answer the question that follows. The bus passengers were rowdy. The driver had to turn around to discipline the passengers. The driver took his eyes off the road. The bus weaved onto the shoulder of the road. Which of these best combines the ideas in the group of sentences above to make an interesting sentence?

Answer 1

I would have to say the sentence, "The driver took his eyes off the road" It pulls you and gets the reader wondering what happens next.

Answer 2

Answer:

The option that best combines the ideas in the group of sentences to make an interesting sentence is When the driver turned around to discipline some rowdy passengers, the bus weaved onto the shoulder of the road.

Explanation:

This option of combination of ideas is the one that shows a better way to communicate a complete message, the construction of this full sentence after combining the ideas explains clearly the order of the events as well as it shows an example of cause and effect as the passengers distracted the driver almost causing an accident.