Pathos is like: look at this poor dog *plays sad music* "for every dollar, you can save a dog" (appeals to your feelings)
Logos is like: according to science, 97% of the population likes carrots (based on stats)
Ethos is like: since im a doctor, you should trust me. (Based on personal experience)
Great story! If you're still continuing on the story, I suggest adding a falling action for the conflict.
using a multitude of space fillers speaking loudly enough for everyone to hear knowing what he is going to say so as to avoid space fillers
<h3>What is
space fillers?</h3>
a short, unimportant article written to fill space in a magazine or newspaper
"Actually" is merely a pause word that a user inserts into a sentence while pondering what to say next or to emphasize the obvious. However, the obvious does not require reinforcement.
Fillers are composed of sugar molecules or hyaluronic acids, collagens (which can come from pigs, cows, cadavers, or be generated in a laboratory), the person's own transplanted fat, and biosynthetic polymers.
Fillers can help people understand what you're saying.
Perhaps the most obvious effect, fillers show that a speaker is still actively speaking – that they still want the airtime.
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