1. Always deliver what you promise.
2. Each pronoun should agree with their antecedent.
3. Between you and I, case is important.
4. Verbs have to agree with their subjects.
5. Don't be a person whom people realize confuses "who" and "whom."
6. Never use no double negatives.
7. A writer should not shift their point of view.
8. When writing, participle must not be dangled. Don't do it even if it's hard not to.
9. Join clauses good, like a conjunction should.
10. Don't write run-on sentences, you need to punctuate them properly.
11. About sentence fragments. Don't. Unless it's for effect.
12. In letter themes and reports use commas to separate items in a series as well as phrases and clauses when required.
13. Don't, use commas, that aren't necessary.
14. Its important to use apostriphe's in the right place's.
15. Don't abbrev. unless approved by the Associated Press Stylebook.
16. Check to see you any words out.
17. Try to never split infinitives.
18. Avoid using a preposition to end a sentence with. That's a practice up with which some readers will not put.
19. Parallel structure will help you in writing more effective sentences to express yourself more gracefully and its pleasing to your editor.
20. In my own personal opinion I think that an author when he is writing should not get into the habit of making use of too many unnecessary words that he does not really need to use.
21. Last but not least, lay off the cliches and mixed metaphors. They might kindle a flood if anger in your editor.
Yes, that's twenty one, but they all needed to be listed to properly answer this question. The errors in the sentences are all purposeful and intended.
I do hope this helped you. :)
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Answer:
Sampson is a servant of the house of Capulet who takes his hatred for the Montagues from his master, Lord Capulet. He seemed like a loud-mouthed man, brave and courageous, and would do anything to get a fight with their enemy. But when things come head-on, he seemed to be weak in reality and would often ask Gregory for advice. He also bravely boasted of doing this and that to the enemy but in reality, he barely had the courage to provoke the men without Gregory by his side.
Explanation:
Sampson is one of the 'men' in the Capulet family from William Shakespeare's "Romeo and Ju liet". The story delves into the fateful story of two lovers who fell victim to their families' feud. The story has remained one of the most read tragic love stories in literature.
Sampson, like his master Lord Capulet and everyone on that side, hates the Montagues and would try to start a confrontation any chance he gets. Act I scene i shows Sampson and his fellow servant-mate Gregory in conversation about the feud between the two houses- Capulets and Montagues. He also seemed boastful, though he seemed to be more weak than strong like he thinks he is. Gregory's comment: <em>"To move is to stir, and to be valiant is to stand. Therefore if thou art moved thou runn’st away"</em> seemed to suggest at the 'weak' nature of Sampson despite his vain and brave declarations of taking on any Montague men.
As the play progresses, Sampson would every now and then get help from Gregory on how to respond to Abram, a Capulet servant. By asking Gregory <em>"Is the law of our side if I say "ay"?"</em> he seemed to be worried about what his action may provoke, though that was what he wanted but not really want, too. He is the type of man who is valiant and brave only on words but would have second thoughts when things get pretty heavy.
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