Mommy is leaving me again at this awful place. I hate it. I know she thinks that is better for me, that she was advised to to do, that I will grow stronger, that I will be surrounded by girls my age, that I will be better nourished, but everything is a lie.
I can not stand the food, so I don't eat it. I miss Mommy so much. Why can't I stay at home with the new baby? Why is the new baby more important than me? They don't even let me keep my letters, so I can feel closer to them. The only thing that makde me happy is that I made a friend but all of a sudden she was taken away to other place.
Deep down, I know that I can't burden Mommy with all my silly feelings. I have to be strong for her and her baby. I will not complain. I only wish Mommy could understand that the only thing I need, the only thing I desire is a family, a house, love, hugs and attention. I hope Mommy comes soon to pick me up, as it is the only thing I crave for.
1- <span>The ancient Chinese board game “Go” is invented long before there was any writing to record its rules. A game from the impossibly distant past has now brought us closer to a moment that once seemed part of an impossibly distant future: a time when machines are cleverer than we are.
<u>Because it's an action that started and finished in the past, this should read </u><u>was</u><u> (Simple Past)</u>
2- </span><span>For years, Go was considered the last redoubt against the march of computers. Machines might win at chess, draughts, Othello, three-dimensional noughts and crosses, Monopoly, bridge, and poker. Go, though, is different.
<u>This continues the same line of mistake as the first paragraph. Because it's referencing something that already happened ("Go was considered...), this should read </u><u>was</u><u> (Simple Past).</u>
The game required intuition, strategising <u>and</u> character reading, along with vast numbers of moves and permutations. According to legend, it was invented by a Chinese emperor to teach his subjects balance and patience: qualities unique to human intelligence.
<u>The conjunction and is used before the last element in a list. In this case, this word should be substituted by a comma because <em>character reading</em> is not the last element on that list.</u>
3- </span><span>This week, though, a computer called Alpha Go <u>defeats</u> the world’s best player of Go. It did so by “ learning” the game, crunching through 30 million positions from recorded matches, reacting and anticipating. It <u>evolves</u> as a player and taught itself.
That single game of Go marks a milestone on the road to the “technological singularity”, the moment when artificial intelligence becomes capable of self-improvement and learns faster than humans can control or understand.</span><span>
<u>These should read defeated ... evolved. This continues the same line of thought on subject-verb agreement. If it's talking about a past event, and the rest of the paragraph sustains that idea, then these verbs should be in Simple Past.</u></span><span>
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Answer:
No, the method of selecting the government is not guarded, that is, shrouded in secrecy. I think that Hamilton is right because the process allowed for the involvement of the people in the electoral process.
Explanation:
Some opponents to the electoral process that was to be adopted in the constitution of the United States believed that the process was "pretty well guarded". This most likely means that they believed that the process was not really transparent. Hamilton objected to this when he said that the process was perfect or at least excellent. I think he is right given some of the reasons he quoted such as;
1. The people were allowed to participate in the process and no preestablished body would represent them.
2. The electoral college chosen by the people possessed the right information, knowledge, and insight to represent them.
3. The fact that the electoral college made their votes in their respective states, made it harder to expose them to violence if they were to be conveyed in one place.
4. Senators and legislators were not to be part of the electoral college. They are chosen from the citizens, and they hold no political office.
B. EXHIBITION is not an element of a plot.
A plot has five elements.
1) Exposition
2) Rising Action
3) Climax
4) Falling Action
5) Resolution
