Answer:
A
Explanation:
Its not B because nothing as an action has happened already, from what ive read here.
Its not C because it isnt the major event of the story.
Its not D because action hasnt started nor finished yet.
Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
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