Wild Peaches by Elinor Wylie
The line “We’ll swim in milk and
honey till we drown” depicts an abundance of supply of food or about prosperity
in general. On the other hand, the line “The spring begins before the winter’s
over” suggests an ideal weather where winter is short-lived and fair weather is
always enjoyed. Finally, the line “We shall live well — we shall live very well”
promises a good and comfortable life. Thus, readers expect that life at the
Eastern Shore is everybody’s dream life: complete, perfect and ideal.
To improve a conclusion, a writer must bare in mind that it should not address a new topic, that is to say, it has to be a recompilation of the topics already mentioned and developed in the paragraphs, so it has to be a kind of "summary", an overall of the topics and ideas discussed. It should be concise and the reader needs to be know it is the conclusion and you are not going to keep on working on the ideas, so sometimes, it is necessary to include the words "to conclude"/ "to round up"/ "in conclusion" or something similar on order to let the reader know you are about to finish.
<h2>The Giver Chapter 18</h2>
<h3>The next day, Jonas asks The Giver about release. The Giver tells him that sometimes his pain makes him want to apply for a release, but he is not allowed to do it until Jonas is trained. ... Upon Jonas's pleading, The Giver relents and tells him the story about the failed Receiver.</h3>
<h3>The Giver explains that after eating dinner, they will together make a plan. There are memories of times when things were different and people had feelings like pride, sorrow, and love. Jonas has helped him realize that memories should be shared.</h3>
A. <span>Good luck comes to those who are ready for it; ambitious people will go to great lengths to gain status.</span>