The answer to the question is C.
Make it rhyme more and make the lines longer
Examples, one with a comma and one without:
Shakespeare was born in Stratford and went on to write Hamlet.
Shakespeare was born in Stratford, later writing Hamlet
Grover Underwood and annabeth
The story is set in New York City's Greenwich Village. This was a popular hangout for artists and other creative types back in the day. Johnsy has a fantasy (fantasy meaning "imagination") that she will die when the last leaf on the ivy vine falls.